Another in the bicycle ride iPhone writing I tend to do and forget about once I get home. Looking over some of the material I have written over the past months on my cell, I decided this could be great content for the blog this week. I will be gone the latter part of the week, so I am scheduling one a day to post each morning at 8:00am EST.
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Oh that I could steal your heart
Whisk you into my arms
Revitalize your passions
Dance your lithe body to serenity.
Oh that I could taste your lips.
Soft, full kisses to remove the pain.
Arms that would fold you in tight.
Companionship offered each cold, darkened night.
Oh to exist and engage in your heart!
To know I could stand in a place set apart
For you and for I as lovers, as one.
To know that my search is now over and done.
All of these things I bring unto you
I vouchsafe them sincere and true
Allow me the thrill of holding your hand
Allow me a love to hold dear and so grand.