This untitled poem was written a couple weeks ago. I will not alter this first draft until I get feedback. In fact, I’m going to place a poll at the end of the poem to determine readers’ reactions. Also, if you care to, please write me a comment with any suggestions and a title. Please be kind as this is straight off my iPhone and written without an edit. That being said, writing cannot improve without constructive input. Please feel free to suggest edits that may make the writing stronger…
I sense you there, in the dark
Petite, lithe, stormy eyes, lovely.
I hear your tears
Sail soft on your cheeks.
Sadness travels an ocean south
Riding waves like valiant messengers
Ears beckon to hear the words
Soul craves the gentle touch.
Dreams nestle your chin on my chest
Scent – exhilirating, touch – divine
Dance, oh the dance,
Silence, made thunder
Fingers thrill in the stroke of your hair
Damp shoulder, monument to trust
Completion, companion, compatriot, friend
I lend you my hand in the words I send
Allow hope to stir in your beautiful heart
Allow peace a chance, a brace, a start
Please, please recieve kindness and know
Love sprouts in odd places and aspires to grow.